Let the critiquing begin! If you want to think like The Agent, you might consider the question, "How much of the entry did you read, and if you didn't read it all, why did you stop?" as you give your feedback, but I'm sure the entrants would love to hear anything you have to say (so long as it's constructive, of course).
Entrants, please remember to critique at least 3 other entries. Also, if you spot a Krista-generated error in your post, do let me know so I can fix it.
Lastly, you should know that all replacing of swear words with funky asterisks is my doing, not the entrants', so you don't need to tell them that profanity in YA is okay. They know:)
I'll announce Ms. Shea's winners and prizes first thing next week. Until then, critique away!